A kiss is not enough
Align the stars in velvet sky
And make the wind sing
Just for you and me
Embrace is an underword
Engulf me in your scent
So the world ceases to exist
Beyond your skin
The more I wait
The more I want
To say to you
Do not just kiss me...
Consume me
Leave me broken
Never to be mended
3 comments:
I read it several times, and it glows in parts, while at other times I felt a bit lost. But then it inspired me to read your previous works, and they are still as warm and delightful as before. Finally I found that ignoring the first two lines makes me like this one more, it keeps up a sense of intrigue until the wait being revealed in the last few lines.
I'll be looking forward to more work from you!
Your insight is nail on the head brilliant, I really should do away with the first two lines. I'll always need you, my friend.
I'm flattered!
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